Tender limbs quiver,
as bewhiskered slithers.
. . . giving in to the caver;
. . . retreating to the burrower:
quavering,
mewling,
while abandoning morals
and relinquishing principles–
helplessly conceding to an ache that dominates;
feebly letting love and hate collide–
as two ravenous give in
to a passion burning deep inside.
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Lyrics, Sentiments and Me 
The passion infused into the words you penned..There’s just no describe..sending my mind pictures i dare not describe .. :O
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Silly. Thank you silly Andrew!
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~At loss for words and mesmerized~ standby 😍😊
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And so do I, crazy. = ))
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Crazy in the best way there is I assure you! 😉
btw the photos on the widget to the left, why not start an insta account? you are in such paradise after all 🙂
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I dont know. I just thought sharing pictures of me and the kids would be nice. Why you asked?
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Many of them caught my attention, Though it would be nice to see them larger on the slideshow *hint hint* 😀
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i was thinking of labeling them “aina and kids photography,” but then again I didnt have the courage. = ))
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This is the part where I give you the puppy dog eyes and encourage it! 😀 i’m at andy1076 on there if you like? hint hint hint!
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Nah. Seriously, I wish you and Glaiza all the best. I am very happy for you.
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Cheers and salamat 🙂
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Passionate stuff Aina!
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It was actually one of my very old compositions, Brad. And just like many of my post recently: I made minor changes and reposted it (since I barely had a time to write) just to keep my blog up and running amid busy schedule. But thank you for the kind support and continued friendship!
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You’re welcome Aina. recycling is good! XD
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Yes, indeed! But I think the first version is always better. 😒 Then again, many thanks and God bless you!
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Sometimes I like my revised versions better. 🙂
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really? why?
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because I edit or write to a finer level as I grow. And sometimes my original is just wonderful. 🙂
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Valid point, but do you know that the first version always carry your natural
voice–the one that is authentic and evocative. And that’s all I can say, Brad. In fact, your poem below, is one beautiful example:
https://writingtofreedom.wordpress.com/2015/02/05/moon-kisses/
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I like this one too and won’t be revising it! 🙂
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I am glad to hear. Coz among all your works, when it comes to poetry, it is my favorite.
No matter, you are really a revelation! Keep it up!
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Thanks my friend. 🙂
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Nope, thank you, Brad!
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🙂
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Much love and hugs to you….
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Ameen 😘
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